First, read a draft of an essay, "Two Critiques of Imperialism." This essay was written in response to an assignment asking the writer to examine how Joseph Conrad's Heart of Darkness and Jonathan Swift's Gulliver's Travels use the strengths of their respective genres to critique imperialism. Revise the essay to make it clearer and more persuasive. Try to make the use of rhetorical devices more effective, the tone more consistent, and the transitions more organized. Your assignment should include the following elements: A clear introduction with a persuasive thesis statement Clear, concise supporting reasons that convincingly defend the thesis Well-written commentary to defend your reasons and evidence Appropriate transitions between and within paragraphs A concluding paragraph that recaps main points and makes the essay feel finished At least one trope and one scheme You should have completed a draft of this assignment in the activity before this one. If you haven't done so, go back and complete that activity now.

The prompt you have been given is to revise an essay to make it clearer. Follow the instruction below to make an effective revision.

Besides the instruction already given in the prompt:

   4. Ensure that your work has an Introduction, a Body, and a Conclusion, then remove all grammatical errors.

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How did the officials of Montgomery try to stop the boycott?

_______metal implements after every use ti avoid infection or possible diseases.

What is the difference between active and passive voice

a) an active voice sentence has a subject that receives the action of the verb while a passive voice sentence as a subject that carries out the action of the verb be

b)an active voice sentence as a subject that carries out the action of the verb while a passive voice sentence has a subject that receives the action of the verb see

c)an active voice sentence uses present and past tense forms of verbs without the use of helpers while a passive voice sentence uses either axillary or linking verbs as a part of a verb phase

d)an active voice sentence describes the actions of the subject of a verb while passive voice describes indirect or direct object

how is hyperbole different from other figurative languages

Read this passage from “The Story of an Hour.” Why is this passage ironic?

It was her sister Josephine who told her, in broken sentences; veiled hints that revealed in half concealing. Her husband's friend Richards was there, too, near her. It was he who had been in the newspaper office when intelligence of the railroad disaster was received, with Brently Mallard's name leading the list of "killed." He had only taken the time to assure himself of its truth by a second telegram, and had hastened to forestall any less careful, less tender friend in bearing the sad message.

Her sister is the one who tells her, but her sister never liked her husband.

Richards had checked the truth of the news, but it turned out to be wrong.

There was more than one person named Brently Mallard on the train.

Her husband had been traveling by train and there was no railroad disaster.

From the book The Alchemist

What does the old man say is the world's greatest lie?

Question 4 options:

we grow old before we can accomplish our dreams


traveling is the best way to educate yourself about the world and others


we can pursue our dreams, but we must be willing to make sacrifices along the way


at a certain point in our lives, we lose control of what's happening to us, and our lives become controlled by fate

Question 7 of 15
On a note card, Elias records information about waste produced by the tech
industry. Which information from one of the sources the student finds is most
clearly bibliographic?
A. Will provide evidence about how the tech industry designs
electronics to last a short while
B. How the tech industry adds much of the waste in landfills
C. Cutting-Edge Today, Junk Tomorrow: How Electronics Are
Polluting Our World by Chhaya Kumar
D. Supports my point that we need to start creating products that can
be reused and repaired

Part A: What does the word fervent mean as used in the excerpt?

"Neither could she deny the justice of his description of Jane. She felt that Jane's feelings, though fervent, were little displayed, and that there was a constant complacency in her air and manner not often united with great sensibility."

feverish
improper
intense
diminishing
true

Part B: What word or phrase best provides context to determine the word fervent?

Neither could she deny the justice of his description of Jane. She felt that Jane's feelings, though fervent, were little displayed, and that there was a constant complacency in her air and manner not often united with great sensibility.

"were little displayed"
"not often united with great sensibility"
"deny the justice"
"constant complacency"

If I am elected class president, I
Which verb phrase correctly completes the sentence?
OA. did achieve
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had achieved
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will have achieved
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have achieved
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Explain the irony of we real cool in 1960 during the start of the civil rights movement in america

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When running, it is important to breathe through your nose.
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence above?
OA. Change it is to you are.
OB. Move When running to the end of the sentence.
OC. Add you are between When and running.
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no change
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Mark the letter A, B, C or D on your answer sheet to indicate the underlined part that needs correction in each of the following questions.
Billy thinks a tablet with WiFi are an amazing tool for seeking information and promoting autonomy.
A. thinks B. are C. seeking D. autonomy

Should school switch to a four day week (opinion essay)

Whats wrong with gg on doubling down with the derricos.

Whom or Who?
Papyrus is a friend with who or whom I'd like to go on vacation.

when he looked at the audience, what happened? the giver chapter 8

. Review paragraphs 16-44. What two things were Reni and her brother doing in this passage?

1.3.9Practice: Complete Your Assignment

The assignment for this lesson is to write a description in the stream of consciousness style. Your description should establish a point of view and express the narrator's personality through tone and vivid imagery.

You should have created a draft of this assignment in the writing activity called "Prepare a Description." If you didn't complete that activity, you should go back and do so now. If you have already completed the draft, continue to the next page to start revising.

Which of the following is an example of sustainability? 5d
O reforestation (replanting trees in a deforested area)
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O mining for coal
O trawling (fishing with a large net)
O monoculture (planting one crop over and over again)

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[1]I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
[5]Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
[10]Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

The waves beside them danced; but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
[15]A poet could not but be gay,
In such a jocund company:
I gazed—and gazed—but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:

For oft, when on my couch I lie
[20]In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.

Line three signals a tone shift from sadness to ______________________.

concern
curiosity
humor
wonder

How does the structure the poet uses help add meaning to the text?
O The use of the rooster imagery suggests the speaker lives on a farm.
o The free-form lines mirror the speaker's fun and lighthearted tone.
The italicized sentence shows the speaker's anger at the mother.
O The rhyme scheme mirrors the turning of pages in a photo album.

what sentence can I make out of the word "trajectory" (the curve of a moving object)​

Which aspect of scientific knowledge do research reports and popular science articles tend to emphasize?
the relationships among the various fields of scientific inquiry
the fact that research is always conducted by highly skilled experts in the field
the degree of difficulty involved in describing scientific phenomena
its dependence on the scientific method, especially the testing of hypotheses

Hello. Can someone help me?​

How do I make my essay more interesting to making the reader invested into it

Memories of a Memory

Have you ever witnessed something amazing, shocking or surprising and found when describing the event that your story seems to change the more you tell it? Have you ever experienced a time when you couldn't really describe something you saw in a way that others could understand? If so, you may understand why some experts think eyewitness testimony is unreliable as evidence in scientific inquiries and trials. New insights into human memory suggest human memories are really a mixture of many non-factual things.

First, memory is vague. Imagine your room at home or a classroom you see every day. Most likely, you could describe the room very generally. You could name the color of the walls, the floors, the decorations. But the image you describe will never be as specific or detailed as if you were looking at the actual room. Memory tends to save a blurry image of what we have seen rather than specific details. So when a witness tries to identify someone, her brain may recall that the person was tall, but not be able to say how tall when faced with several tall people. There are lots of different kinds of "tall."

Second, memory uses general knowledge to fill in gaps. Our brains reconstruct events and scenes when we remember something. To do this, our brains use other memories and other stories when there are gaps. For example, one day at a library you go to quite frequently, you witness an argument between a library patron and one of the librarians. Later, when telling a friend about the event, your brain may remember a familiar librarian behind the desk rather than the actual participant simply because it is recreating a familiar scene. In effect, your brain is combining memories to help you tell the story.

Third, your memory changes over time. It also changes the more you retell the story. Documented cases have shown eyewitnesses adding detail to testimony that could not have been known at the time of the event. Research has also shown that the more a witness's account is told, the less accurate it is. You may have noticed this yourself. The next time you are retelling a story, notice what you add, or what your brain wants to add, to the account. You may also notice that you drop certain details from previous tellings of the story.

With individual memories all jumbled up with each other, it is hard to believe we ever know anything to be true. Did you really break your mother's favorite vase when you were three? Was that really your father throwing rocks into the river with you when you were seven? The human brain may be quite remarkable indeed. When it comes to memory, however, we may want to start carrying video cameras if we want to record the true picture.

Which word from the text best describes memories of places?

Vague
Familiar
Individual
Remarkable

Why shouldn’t gatsby take the fall for daisy

Read the excerpt from "Upon Receiving the Nobel Prize for Literature" by William Faulkner.

"He must teach himself that the basest of all things is to be afraid; and, teaching himself that, forget it forever, leaving no room in his workshop for anything but the old verities and truths of the heart, the universal truths lacking which any story is ephemeral and doomed—love and honor and pity and pride and compassion and sacrifice."

What does the use of the word ephemeral suggest?
Question 3 options:

A writer must never let go of fear if he wants to be successful.


Writers too fearful to write truthfully are criticized.



A story without heart will be short lived.


A story does not need to be truthful to last forever.

Read the excerpt from "Early Monsoon" in Inside Out and Back Again.


In the distance


bombs


explode like thunder,


slashes


lighten the sky,


gunfire


falls like rain.


How does the figurative language in the excerpt affect the meaning of the text?


It shows the intensity of the attacks even though they are far away.


It describes the violence of war and of nature as harsh but necessary.


It contrasts bombs and gunfire with beautiful elements of nature.


It explains that the attacks happen only in the evening when it is dark

Use context clues to guess the definition of “traditionalist