Read the sentence.

The squirrel who ran in circles around the circumference of the tree chattered angrily at the curious cat.

Which correctly revises the sentence?

The squirrel, who ran in circles around the circumference of the tree, chattered angrily at the curious cat.
The squirrel who ran in circles around the circumference of the tree, chattered angrily at the curious cat.
The squirrel, who ran in circles around the circumference of the tree chattered angrily, at the curious cat.
The squirrel who ran in circles around the circumference of the tree chattered angrily, at the curious cat.

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Answer 1

The sentence that most effectively revises the given sentence would be as follows:

A). The squirrel, who ran in circles around the circumference of the tree, cha-tt-ered angrily at the curious ca-t.

The first sentence most adequately revises the given sentence because it is correctly punctuated which clarifies the meaning effectively.The comma(,) is adequately employed to separate the non-essential clause which provides additional details to the sentence.This helps the readers in understanding the intended meaning clearly and effectively.

Thus, option A is the correct answer.

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Which sentence uses commas correctly?
Since she was running late Esme ran out the door and forgot her project.
O Since she was running late Esme ran out the door, and forgot her project.
Since she was running late, Esme ran out the door, and forgot her project.
Since she was running late, Esme ran out the door and forgot her project.

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Answer:

Its the last one

Explanation:

Which of the following is nonverbal communication?
-Janice makes a face to express her dislike of the new ice cream flavor.
-Jack tells Sally that he likes her.
-Bob tells Rebecca he does not want to go on any more dates.
-Mike said, "I just do not want to talk right now."

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Answer:Janice makes a face to express her dislike of the new ice cream flavor.  

in this answere janice is not using her voice and instead she is using her face...so therefore she is using nonverbal comunication to show that she does not like the icecream.

Which of the following statements reflects certainty as a cultural value?
a. "Your answer was too vague; I don't understand what you mean!"
b. "I'd rather you were direct and upfront with me."
c. "Just say what you mean! Don't beat around the bush."
d. All of the above

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Answer:

D all the above

Explanation:

i did one eng

All of the above statements reflect certainty as a cultural value. The correct option is D. The principles and values that have been passed down through the generations are known as cultural values.

What is meant by cultural value?

Cultural values are defined as the fundamental beliefs or ideals that form the foundation of a society or a community. These ideas serve as the center of the community, which develops a peaceful network of connections around these common principles.

This section introduces the idea of cultural value analysis and explores four value dimensions: individualism-collectivism, power distance, uncertainty avoidance, and femininity-masculinity. Individualism-collectivism is the key value dimension.

Thus, the ideal selection is option D.

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Read this sentence from paragraph 2.



The explosion released as much energy as a modern nuclear
bomb.



What is the purpose of this comparison?

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Answer:

This depends if it's a multiple-choice or a writing question.

IF you have to write the answer this might help you:

Explanation:

The purpose of the comparison is to :

1.  To give the reader a mental image of how prodigious the explosion was.

2. IF you can tell that the comparison seems a bit overboard the author might be exaggerating.

Quilt of a Country
Select the claim the author makes in her argument. *

A.) Americans put too much importance on their differences.
B.) The United States is a thriving community with no divides.
C.) The differences between Americans make it impossible to come together.
D.) Despite the differences between Americans, their ability to unify is unique and
noteworthy

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Answer:

D.) Despite the differences between Americans, their ability to unify is unique and

noteworthy

Explanation:

In this article, Anna Quindlen claims that America is unique country. There are people of many nations, cultures, races and religions, but all of them can get along with each other even if their nations or religions are at war. Of course, this can be regarded as over - idealised point of view, but she states it's true, especially when facing a major threat (she gives example of the 9/11 terrorist attack).

So, with this in mind, we could say that that the correct option is D.

A student is writing a blog claiming that school uniforms are a good idea. Which sentence provides evidence to support this claim?

Many students are against wearing school uniforms because they think they will look silly.
A recent study found that students who wear uniforms are more focused during class.
A recent poll found that only ten percent of teachers are in favor of school uniforms.
Many parents worry that school uniforms will be more expensive than regular clothing.

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Answer:

A recent study found that students who wear uniforms are more focused during class.

Explanation:

This answer is the correct choice as the student is advocating FOR uniforms, and thus would want positive evidence.

Answer:

A recent study found that students who wear uniforms are more focused during class.

Explanation:

100 points!!!! Write for each word a :
Connotation: what you think the word means

Synonym: a word that has the same meaning of the word

Antonym: opposite in meaningnm

Etymology: origin of the word

Sentence: create an original sentence using the word


Vocabulary words;;

Comatose

inveigle

pallid

poignantly

ruminations

settee

apathetic

expertise

harry

impelled

perusal

quizzically

vouchsafe

bailiwick

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100 points here we go

1 : comatose

connotation: coma

synonym: unconscious

antonym(s): sleep, unconsciousness

etymology: greek, late 17th century, deep sleep

sentence: the comatose patient is still and unmoving.

2 : inveigle

connotation: persuade

synonym: coax

antonym(s): chill, damp, deter, dissuade, drive away, repel, warn

etymology: late 15th century, french, blind

sentence: he inveigled him to do his homework for him.

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12 : quizzically

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14 : bailiwick

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Answer:

1 is already done. Before he became an actor he was a taxi driver.Shontello studied law when she was at university.She knows Rihanna, they went to school together.

That is all I can do right now, sorry.

Which choice is a sentence fragment?
Select one:
She took a break she made a quick phone call.
Jerri exercised.
Ran around the block.
She finished up with some jumping jacks.

help pls

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Answer:

Ran around the block.

Explanation:

Think of just saying "ran around the block" to someone. Who ran around the block? It doesn't make any sense on its own, and needs a subject. A sentence fragment is just a part of a sentence.

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The Reefs By Marcella Morris

She clutched her lab work to her side walking briskly towards school. The snow fell in typical New York flurries and the ground was still icy from last night’s freeze. Careful not to slip, she climbed the steps and crossed the campus towards the science building.

“What am I doing?” she murmured. Sophie’s worse habit was talking to herself in public. “I have been warned.”

“You are just a high school kid, Sophie,” they warned. “What makes you think you are capable of solving this crucial environmental issue? Stop wasting your time.” The professors would not give her laboratory time to complete research nor would they share their expertise with her.

But, she could not stop.

After that snorkeling trip she took with her aunt to the coral reefs, she felt that something had shifted inside her. The snorkeling guide made one fact very clear- these colonies of tiny organisms would not last. In fact, we’d be lucky if they lasted 5 more years. She cared about the safety of these coral reefs more than she has cared about anything for a long, long time. She had to do something for the fragile, endangered habitat with its fish, mollusks, worms, crustaceans and many more.

So, she used her money to create a lab at her aunt’s house. She worked tirelessly—endlessly—sleeping only when she had to.

“It’s what mom and dad would have done,” she thought.

Her best friend Sam, would hang out with her everyday—eating pizza, fries, and whatever else he could get his hands on, keeping her company with his humor while Sophie worked on her experiments. And now, she has a biological solution in her hands.

She hesitated at the door to the labs. Nervously, she shifted her lab report from one hand to the other.

“I know that have an innovative approach to solving the coral reef issue and I know I can help,” she said to no one.

The image of being ridiculed by these professors, delayed her entry. She stood outside the door, wanting to run back- wanting to hide- glued to the icy spot.

“Hey, Sophie!” She turned at the unexpected sound of Sam’s voice.

“I’ve been… trying to catch up with you,” he panted- out of breath. “Let’s go in and… show them… what you’ve got.”

Sophie tilted her head, smiled at Sam and opened the door. She walked confidently to the front, laid out her research on the podium and began her presentation. When her presentation ended, it was to the enthusiastic sound of the scientists’ applause.



Setting:

Protagonist:

Rising Action:

Conflict:

Climax:

Falling Action:

Resolution:

Write a one paragraph summary of the story that explains how theme develops in, “The Reefs.”

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Answer:

my acc got deleted:(

Explanation:

is brother a common noun

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Answer:

Generally, the noun 'brother' is a common noun. It is not the name of a specific brother.

Explanation:

In the middle of describing Khalil, what does Starr imagine?

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Answer:

She says, "I think about DeVante for some reason,"

Explanation:

Answer:

It also makes her imagine about the scene every time she describes him

Kahlil in the window "Are you ok"

Cop pulls out a gun

The cop shooting Kahlil once.. twice... three times

All just because of a black hairbrush that looked like a gun to the officer

Explanation:

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imagine you were forced to leave your house and run away unexpectedly what would you pack where would u go? whats teps would you take to ensure your survival?

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Answer:

can you help me with some homeworks

Answer:

I would clothes and some food and I'd book a condo and I would cover all of my tracks

Explanation:

Ya gotta do what ya gotta do to survive.

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" seventh grade " is a narrative. How is this form of writing different from a persuasive text?

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Answer: We need the text

Explanation:

What accurately describes this synthesis of the text?
Check all that apply.
It provides a reflection of the changes that occurred
as a result of women "leaving their homes to cycle
and socialize."
It draws a conclusion by stating that bicycle
manufacturers "showed female models in their
advertisements."
It presents new information by stating that the
"politicians, soldiers, business leaders, and even the
leading athletes" were all men.
It gives a basic overview of the text by stating that
"Louise Armaindo and Frankie Nelson had their
exploits splashed all over the papers."
It reveals a new understanding about the topic by
Stating that "the bicycle changed that "

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Answer:

A,C,E

Explanation:

got it right

Answer:

ace

Explanation:


How is an internal conflict expressed in a story?

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Answer:

Internal conflict is when a character struggles with their own opposing desires or beliefs. It happens within them, and it drives their development as a character. External forces stand in the way of a character's motivations and create tension as the character tries to reach their goals.

Answer:

When a character is struggling with themselves. it's a character vs character situation.

Explanation:

Which is a sensory detail?
O A. A positive attitude
B. A bright red scarf
C. A nice personality
O D. A meaningful moment

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Answer:

b. A bright red scarf

Explanation:

Answer:

b.a bright red scarf

Explanation:

because that sentemce is very detailed about the scarf

How can conjunctive adverbs help achieve coherence

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Answer:

They don't illustrate a relationship,they provide clarity for the meaning of a preceding noun,they illustrate the connection between two ideas and they introduce relative clauses.

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One of the things the saloon is built with is​

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Here's what you'll need to do to open your salon—plus tips from two successful ... Build your salon brand around the clientele you want.

In England, strict Puritans were known as

Question 1 option:

Separatists


Anglicans


Catholics


Theologians

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Answer:

Separatists

Explanation:

Answer:

anglicans

Explanation:

What is the object in the sentence "the baseball developed from both of these games

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Answer: both of these games

EMERGENCY! PLEASE ANSWER ASAP! ​

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Answer:

the answer is 'the title of Poet Laureate'

Select the word that means to show by good evidence.

The United States government has imposed labeling requirements on manufacturers who
sell vitamins and other dietary supplements. The manufacturer must be able to
substantiate any claims it makes about the product's benefits with facts or results of
scientific studies. The government can take action against a company for making
misleading statements.

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Answer:

am pretty sure the correct answer is substantiate

Once Amy got to the end of her essay, she realized that she had not directly addressed the prompt. Luckily, Amy had
some of her test time left. The best solution for Amy would be to
C.
a. revise her prompt
b. re-write her thesis
revise off-topic sections of her essay
d. completely re-write her entire essay from
scratch
Please select the best answer from the choices provided
A
B
оооо
С
D

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Answer:

Its c

Explanation:

Amy realized she hadn't directly addressed the prompt as she got to the end of her essay. Amy's greatest option is an option (C), which would be to revise her essay's off-topic elements.

Why does Amy need revising?

The two tasks she must complete to significantly improve her essay are revising and editing. Both are critical components of the writing process.

Amy can analyze two crucial areas of her work individually while revising and editing, giving each task her entire attention.

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Refer to the article "Harun al-Rashid & One Thousand and One Nights."

Which two details support the central idea that Harun al-Rashid was an extremely rich and learned ruler?

“…during al-Rashid's rule, the Islamic world began to experience an explosion of cultural and intellectual growth.”
“…al-Rashid was the second son of his father, al-Mahdi, an important political leader.”
“…al-Rashid became the caliph -- or ruler -- of an Islamic state whose capital was the city of Baghdad."
“Libraries sprouted in cities across the caliphate, including the wonderfully named House of Wisdom in Baghdad, which al-Rashid helped found.”
i really need help!

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The answers are:

A.(“…during al-Rashid's rule, the Islamic world began to experience an explosion of cultural and intellectual growth.”)

D.(“Libraries sprouted in cities across the caliphate, including the wonderfully named House of Wisdom in Baghdad, which al-Rashid helped found.”)

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allusions in a quilt of a country

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Answer:

A Quilt of a Country' is a commentary written by Pulitzer-prize winning author Anna Quindlen for Newsweek following the devastation of the September 11, 2001, attacks on America. The premise behind this article is that despite the diversity that can create a lot of problems within cities across America, diversity serves as a tribute to what makes America special.

please help me it is timed will mark brainly

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Answer:

I did my best not completely sure they are all correct

Explanation:

1) C

2) D

3) A

4) A

5) B

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I have to write a story told in the point of view of the villain. I've never done a prompt like this before, and this is very difficult for me. Can someone bounce me some ideas? Will give brainliest stg

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Answer:

Okay, if the points of view has to be of the villain, you could write like what his powers are, who he is trying to catch, and his story behind the mask.

Like if the villain comes like from a poor family, or that he has a dark past.

Hope this helps!!!!

Explanation:

IDEAS:

have the villain be always beaten by the hero and he is giving up but someone evil comes to help him take down the hero but in the end have the original villain betray the other villain because he went to far to beat the hero and he becomes the hero's sidekick or friend.

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Compared to cars, airplanes have had a greater impact on
modern society.

Strong: Claim
Weak: Not a Claim

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I don’t understand what you’re asking, but that would be a claim

Claim: Airplanes have had a greater impact on modern society than cars.

What is Phrase and Claim ?

Airplanes have revolutionized the way we travel and have made the world a smaller place. With airplanes, people can travel long distances in a matter of hours, connecting different parts of the world in a way that was never possible before. This has led to increased globalization, international trade, and cultural exchange.

Moreover, airplanes have had a significant impact on industries such as tourism, business, and agriculture. The aviation industry has also created millions of jobs and contributes significantly to the global economy. On the other hand, while cars have certainly impacted society, their impact is more localized, with a focus on personal transportation and individual mobility.

In summary, while both airplanes and cars have had an impact on modern society, the impact of airplanes has been more significant and far-reaching.

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What is the purpose of an introduction?

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Answer:

To inform the audience about the main point of the essay.

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