Problem: The writing is too feminine, translate it to a more "man" POV.

That b*tch really had the nerve to disrespect me. She was nothing compared to me, like dirt on one of my shoes. As far as I could tell, the girl was not popular, not anything, but she had no respect for me. I didn’t like attention all that much, but I hate feeling anything but superior, and the girl acted as if I was the inferior one. This completely p*ssed me off, as well as the fact that she had kicked me in a painful space. All I wanted her to be was intimated, but instead I now looked like some idi*t. I grabbed my backpack as the students filed into the classroom. A couple of girls looked over their shoulder towards me and one of them started giggling, but I disregarded them. I wanted to find that girl; she couldn’t just ridicule me like that and get away. I couldn’t find her anywhere in the senior hall so I gave up as I headed to my next class, a headache of annoyance forming. I wanted to show her who was dominant in this school, whether I was just a new student or not. I was always given what I wanted, my father was rich, and my money was not provided just by him; I had done my own contributions. I wasn’t patient enough to let some girl look over me like that if she was going to sit next to me and act like I was irrelevant.

Once I passed all the classes my mind kept drifting over to the girl. I clenched my fist closed and open; I couldn’t get over the fact that she had the nerve to kick me. It was such a simple act, and yet no-one, at least females, had ever done that to me. I got drifted off in my thoughts. I didn't even notice the squad of men who had gathered around me.

“Hey man! You think you’re some golden boy don’t you? Stealing our women like that!” One of them yelled. I looked at him a bit closer; I wasn’t very tall, I was 5’ 9, but he was incredibly short, 5' 4. He was quite chubby and had black hair that was covered in pounds of gel. I clicked my tongue and went back to my thoughts, dismissing the girly groan coming from him. He honestly looked ug*y; I couldn’t be bothered by his bravado appearance. His jaw tightened and three boys, similar to him in looks, went behind him. One of them was punching his hand with his fist trying to act tough, and I had to stop my laughter from exploding. Abruptly, my guard's car pulled up, a white porsche.

I looked over to them leaning my head against the wall mockingly, “Well, as scary as you rats are, I have to go.” I gave them a scornful smile and I walked to the car. None of them bothered following me, probably realizing I wasn’t worth it. I opened the front door and got into the car, and just that was enough to gain the attention of the students from miles away. I got in and the guard began the silent drive towards my house, which was a big mansion quite far away from school. As I have said, I am superior to any of my peers. My father and I travel a lot due to the needs of his – job, but this doesn’t ruin any of our living conditions. I reached the front of my house to be greeted by a guard, who escorted me towards the kitchen before leaving the room. I saw the cook and requested dinner, specifically pasta and meatballs. I never had much of a care for gourmet foods, and I couldn’t care less about what I would eat. I went into my room, which was located on the third floor, and plopped down on the coach.

My room contained a king-size pearl white bed that was situated on the right of me, the opposite side of the door; a gray couch, with a TV across from it; a basketball hoop on my door; a gaming chair and gaming computer on a desk to my left, as corny as it sounds; and a beanbag with a bunch of sport gear on the right in the corner of the room.

Soon my food arrived and I sat myself on my desk, right next to the couch, and began working on the homework. As much as I could care less about school, my father owned many businesses, illegal or legal, and I needed to get to college and that means I needed to try this senior year. I groaned loudly in the air and looked back to the tons of homework already assigned to me on the first day of school. I finished quickly as despite the amount, school was very easy for me. My mind was clouded with thoughts of the girl from earlier; I didn’t even know her name. I grimaced from the reminder of where she had kicked me and I shook her out of my head. There was no need for someone unimportant to distract me, and I would show her soon enough she should have respected me.

Answer:

ok i had fixed it and made it more "manly" i hope its what you asked for

Explanation:

That b*tch really had the nerve to disrespect me. She was nothing compared to me, like dirt on one of my shoes. As far as I could tell, the girl was not anything, but she had no respect for me. I didn’t like attention all that much, but I hate feeling anything but superior, and the girl acted as if I was the inferior one. This completely p*ssed me off, as well as the fact that she had kicked me in a painful space. I grabbed my backpack as the students filed into the classroom. A couple of girls looked over their shoulder towards me and one of them started giggling, but I disregarded them. I wanted to find that girl; she couldn’t just ridicule me like that and get away. I couldn’t find her anywhere in the senior hall so I gave up as I headed to my next class, a headache of annoyance forming. I wanted to show her who was dominant in this school, whether I was just a new student or not. I was always given what I wanted, my father was rich, and my money was not provided just by him; I had done my own contributions. I wasn’t patient enough to let some girl look over me like that if she was going to sit next to me and act like I was irrelevant.

Once I passed all the classes my mind kept drifting over to the girl. I clenched my fist closed and open; I couldn’t get over the fact that she had the nerve to kick me. It was such a simple act, and yet no-one, at least females, had ever done that to me. I got drifted off in my thoughts. I didn't even notice the squad of men who had gathered around me.

“Hey man! You think you’re some golden boy don’t you? Stealing our women like that!” One of them yelled. I looked at him a bit closer; I wasn’t very tall, but he was incredibly short. He was quite chubby and had black hair that was covered in pounds of gel. I clicked my tongue and went back to my thoughts, dismissing the girly groan coming from him. He honestly looked ug*y; I couldn’t be bothered by his bravado appearance. His jaw tightened and three boys, similar to him in looks, went behind him. One of them was punching his hand with his fist trying to act tough, and I had to stop my laughter from exploding. Abruptly, my guard's car pulled up, a white porsche.

I looked over to them leaning my head against the wall mockingly, “Well, as scary as you rats are, I have to go.” I gave them a scornful smile and I walked to the car. None of them bothered following me, probably realizing I wasn’t worth it. I opened the front door and got into the car, and just that was enough to gain the attention of the students from miles away. I got in and the guard began the drive towards my house, which was a big mansion quite far away from school. As I have said, I am superior to any of my peers. My father and I travel a lot due to the needs of his – job, but this doesn’t ruin any of our living conditions. I reached the front of my house to be greeted by a guard, who escorted me towards the kitchen before leaving the room. I saw the cook and requested dinner, specifically pasta, I never had much of a care for gourmet foods, and I couldn’t care less about what I would eat. I went into my room, which was located on the third floor, and plopped down on the coach.

My room contained a king-size bed that was situated on the right of me, the opposite side of the door; a gray couch, with a TV across from it; a basketball hoop on my door; a gaming chair and gaming computer on a desk to my left and a beanbag with a bunch of sport gear on the right in the corner of the room.

Soon my food arrived and I sat myself on my desk, and began working on the homework. As much as I could care less about school, my father owned many businesses, illegal or legal, and I needed to get to college and that means I needed to try this senior year. I groaned loudly in the air and looked back to the tons of homework already assigned to me on the first day of school. I finished quickly as despite the amount, school was very easy for me. My mind was clouded with thoughts of the girl from earlier; I didn’t even know her name. I grimaced from the reminder of where she had kicked me and I shook her out of my head. There was no need for someone unimportant to distract me, and I would show her soon enough she should have respected me.

Dogs make better pets than cats because humans and dogs have had more time to adapt to one another.
Which choice below is the most effective supporting topic sentence for a paragraph in this essay?
Dogs, like humans, are social animals that prefer to live in organized groups.
O Dogs were domesticated 20,000 years before cats.
Cats started hanging around people because farming attracted mice, dogs liked us for our garbage dumps.
O DNA studies show that domesticated cats interbreed with their wild relatives more frequently than dogs do.

Which grammar is correct?..In 3 hours or in 3 more hours?

Read an excerpt from "Television and the Public Interest" and answer the question. The speech was delivered by Newton N. Minow, chairman of the Federal Communications Commission, to the nation’s television executives in 1961.

[1] … But when television is bad, nothing is worse. I invite each of you to sit down in front of your television set when your station goes on the air and stay there, for a day, without a book, without a magazine, without a newspaper, without a profit and loss sheet or a rating book to distract you. Keep your eyes glued to that set until the station signs off. I can assure you that what you will observe is a vast wasteland.

[2] You will see a procession of game shows, formula comedies about totally unbelievable families, blood and thunder, mayhem, violence, sadism, murder, western bad men, western good men, private eyes, gangsters, more violence, and cartoons. And endlessly, commercials—many screaming, cajoling, and offending. And most of all, boredom. True, you'll see a few things you will enjoy. But they will be very, very few. And if you think I exaggerate, I only ask you to try it.

[3] Is there one person in this room who claims that broadcasting can't do better? Well a glance at next season's proposed programming can give us little heart. Of 73 and 1/2 hours of prime evening time, the networks have tentatively scheduled 59 hours of categories of action-adventure, situation comedy, variety, quiz, and movies. Is there one network president in this room who claims he can't do better?

[4] The best estimates indicate that during the hours of 5 to 6 P.M. sixty percent of your audience is composed of children under twelve. And most young children today, believe it or not, spend as much time watching television as they do in the schoolroom. I repeat—let that sink in, ladies and gentlemen—most young children today spend as much time watching television as they do in the schoolroom. It used to be said that there were three great influences on a child: home, school, and church. Today, there is a fourth great influence, and you ladies and gentlemen in this room control it.

[5] If parents, teachers, and ministers conducted their responsibilities by following the ratings, children would have a steady diet of ice cream, school holidays, and no Sunday school. What about your responsibilities? Is there no room on television to teach, to inform, to uplift, to stretch, to enlarge the capacities of our children? Is there no room for programs deepening their understanding of children in other lands? There are some fine children's shows, but they are drowned out in the massive doses of cartoons, violence, and more violence. Must these be your trademarks? Search your consciences and see if you cannot offer more to your young beneficiaries whose future you guide so many hours each and every day …

[6] You must provide a wider range of choices, more diversity, more alternatives. It is not enough to cater to the nation's whims; you must also serve the nation's needs. And I would add this: that if some of you persist in a relentless search for the highest rating and the lowest common denominator, you may very well lose your audience. Because … the people are wise, wiser than some of the broadcasters—and politicians—think.

Select the two sentences that support the argument that television should not merely entertain audiences.

"And endlessly, commercials—many screaming, cajoling, and offending. And most of all, boredom." (paragraph 2)
"Today, there is a fourth great influence, and you ladies and gentlemen in this room control it." (paragraph 4)
"Search your consciences and see if you cannot offer more to your young beneficiaries whose future you guide so many hours each and every day …" (paragraph 5)
"It is not enough to cater to the nation's whims; you must also serve the nation's needs." (paragraph 6)
"Because … the people are wise, wiser than some of the broadcasters—and politicians—think." (paragraph 6)

Which student is most clearly using evidence to support an opinion?

A. Elsa

B. Zoe

C. Nick

D. Ray

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1. Senait's friend is stressed about an upcoming test. Senait already took the test and got 100%, so she knows all the answers already. Should she: a. Just give the answers to her friend b. Use her knowledge to coach her friend c. Not get involved at all Zolalom overhears two students hraneing about havino nosted some inannronriate ir​

21. My brother wanted to become a professional clown, and nothing could dissuade him. O deter Ohumor O persuade O encourage​

What did Mrs. Winterbottom bake before she disappeared?
Apple pie
O Chocolate Chip Cookies
© Blueberry Muffins
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According to popular theory, what is Shakespeare's main source (now lost) for Hamlet?
O A play by Ben Johnson
O A short work by John Donne
O A play by Christopher Marlow
O An earlier play, possibly written by Shakespeare: Ur-Hamlet

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A got repainted
B. get repainted
C. had it repainted
D. had repainted it

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a.
were talking
b.
was talking
c.
talked
2.Kate was very pleased to see Nora again after such a long time. She … her school friend for five years.
a.
hadn't seen
b.
didn't see
c.
hasn't seen
3.The students of our department … a lot of time in the reading room.
a.
have spent
b.
spent
c.
spend
4.When he … that letter to his colleague he suddenly remembered that he didn’t know the exact address.
a.
was writing
b.
writes
c.
wrote
5.I … the report by Monday and it’s needed for Monday morning.
a.
won’t have finished
b.
won’t finish
c.
don’t finish
6.Good luck with the exam. We … of you.
a.
shall think
b.
shall be thinking
c.
are thinking

7.
Which of these is an example of formal speech?

“I kind of liked the last book he wrote.”

“Mr. Lee, your presentation was both informative and enjoyable.”

“Elizabeth, I can’t believe you missed that goal!”

“Ben, I thought you could come over after practice.”

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What does this dialogue reveal about Paul?
He thinks his father does not respect his opinion.
What does this dialogue reveal about Paul's father?
ANSWER

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to live fully
to be as good as one is expected
to be as good as is possible

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2. In the space below, write the research question that will guide you in your research, including the three things the assignment calls for.



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4. Choose one of these sources and write about how current and relevant it is for your research question.


5. Select another one of your sources and write about how credible and trustworthy it is. What are the credentials of the author or the publication that lead you to believe it's a credible source?



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Give me the keyring with eight old
brass keys on it.
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B. keys, keyring
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