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I can relate to Martin Luther King Jr. Because I was judged of my character and how I stand out to people. In middle school I couldn’t really find myself, throughout my middle school years I’ve always gone through lots of depression, anxiety, and being unfairly judged. I was always being called quiet, mean, or stuck up because of the way I either talk to people I don’t know for the first time or just...there around a bunch of people and it would always make me overthink and I would get even more nervous hearing that people really think that of me. I was judged of the way I looked such as my face expressions sometimes I would have a look on my face as if I was upset or sad. People would come up to me and say “ Hey, are you okay” or “You good”.
Or if I meet someone and talk to them they would say “When I first saw you I wanted to speak to you, but you looked like you were mad so I just didn’t say anything” or “I actually wanted to talk to you but you looked stuck up”. In these type of situations it would always irritate me because I really don’t mean to look “stuck up”. But at the end people would say I’m really nice and fun to hangout with. In the middle of 7th grade I was bullied by a old friend. I was always nice to her even when people made fun of her.
She started spreading roomers about me and my close friends would come up and tell me what she’s been saying and ever since then, I was really embarrassed and I would think that people at school thought I was really like that. That whole situation caused other people to judge me even more because of the rumors my old friend has said about me and it made me feel like I had no one to talk to and I felt lonely. When I went to school the next day, I walked down the hall in the cafetiria and some people started looking at me weird as if I looked mad. I still had three close friends at the time but it was like they weren't there for me and sometimes they would joke around and say "Why do you look so mad, "Are you okay', and "Why do you look so stuck up?'.
It kind of offended me just because of what the other people would say to me and it made me upset. The rest of the school year I always went home crying because of what happened in the past, my anxiety, depression, and how people judged me because of my mean face. I would try to talk to one my school counselors because they told me that they weren't going to send home a email. But it didn't work because every time I express the way I feel and how I haven't been doing good mentally, the counselor would send home a email saying what Iv'e been talking to them about and them my mom would get mad at me because I didn't talk to her about what's been going on about my mental health and how I felt at school. Towards the end of 8th grade It felt like I was losing myself even more because of my anxiety, depression, lack of sleep causing me to zone out a lot, and my mom would judge me because of how I talked to her or looked and say that I always getting a attitude when I talk to her sometimes and it became an issue to where she thought I wasn't, being responsible and trustworthy in some situations.
It got to the point where I wanted to keep stuff to my self because it was like if I keep staying after then she would think I was doing something else. I met a new transfer student and she seemed really nice at first. But once I got to know her it was like i met a whole other person. She very loud, blunt, and had no filter, and she also judged people such as (saying she didn't want that person to be her friend because they're "ugly"). She put me in the wrong crowd and got me to do stuff that i wasn't comfortable doing.
I wanted to tell her that I didn't want to be friends with her but I thought that if I told her that, she would've probably did the same thing my old friend did to me in the 7th grade. So whenever I hung out with her and a couple of my close friends as distractions because that was the only time I could really go out and have fun. Later that year we stopped being friends because I didn't like how she was treating me as a "friend". She kept getting me to do stuff I didn't want to so and if I didn't do something in a specific situation sometimes she would say I was being "weird", "annoying", and "fake". During the summer that year my mental health got even worse and iv'e been going through a lot of mixed emotions.
But some things that helped over the summer was that whenever I distance myself, I feel more comfortable and I'll get to have time to myself instead of doing what my "friends" tell me to do. This helped me realized that whatever I was going through throughout my middle school years, that I needed to focus on myself and if I ever wanted to hangout with my friends, I should should hangout with the people I can trust and be myself with.
Which sentence states the theme of the text?
Children should stick up for themselves on the playground to not get bullied.
People should say and do the things they want to before life passes them by.
People sometimes have trouble learning from their mistakes.
O Childhood is full of difficult situations that are sad to remember.
Answer:
People should say and do the things they want to before life passes them by.
Explanation:
I am pretty sure this is the answer. Hope this helps!!
Does anyone knows where Buddha was born ??
Answer:
its Nepal is country name and its capital is kathmandu
in Nepal. kapilbastu
Answer:
Buddha was born on kapilvastu,Lumbini.his father was Suddhon gautam and his mother was mayadevi.
His date of birth in nepali is 623BS and his english date of birth is on april 8.
Type the homograph that could fill both blanks.
He_____the cold air on his head when he wore his thin_____hat.
Answer:
he felt the cold air on head when he wore his thin (small, wide) hat
Explanation:
Answer:
felt
Explanation:
He felt the cold air on his head when he wore his thin felt hat.
Dictating what people will be seen wearing next season is a lucrative career for those who have a desire to create and strong passion for fashion.
Define the underlined word in the sentence above.
a.
fun
c.
high-paying
b.
lucky
d.
low-paying
Please select the best answer from the choices provided
Answer:
C
Explanation:
lucrative means high paying
Summary
What style of words—slang, informal, or formal—would you use when writing a letter to your town’s mayor?
Why?
Answer: I would use formal
Explanation: The mayor is in a position of authority, therefore, it is best to use formal language. Make sure you properly address the issue you need with support and be respectful.
Question in jojo Did Jotaro beat dio cause i didn't see the whole fight. please tell me thx :>
As they were fightings a loud noise comes as jotaro turns around he is punched by a enormous force which he had never experienced,he is left paralyzed he cant move his legs or arms all he can do is hope that whoever that entity is isnt here to kill him
Dio is left all alone by himself he tries to recognize the entity but its glowing with such high frequency that staring any longer at it would turn dio blind
Dio expects for the worse as the entity comes closer and closer
Dio clenches his fists and focuses all his power against this entity and then KABOOM dio goes flying through the roof and lands next to injured Jotaro
Jotaro yells at the entity to show his true self
And BOOM turns out the entity is no other than the mighty
.
..
...
GOKU and he has turned insane
he is on a mission to obliviate JoJo from existence
he has been brainwashed by beerus
Goku starts bashing everyone in his way
from innocrnt kids to elderly people
even dio starts to feel sympathy for these people but he knows he cant do anything to stop him
.
But
there comes a noise of a annoyed Man in his 20's
As soon as jotaro sees him he recognizes him and he gets his hopes up
turns out hr is no other than
.
..
...
Saitama san
Goku looks at his bald head and does the worse possible thing an individual can do
he laughs at SAITAMA
and taunts him that he cant even grow his hair and BOOM (*SERIOUS PUNCH*)
Goku goes flying into a whole another universe and lands on uncle max's minivan.. Benjamin tennison(Ben10) recognizes him and offers him a ride .. Goku is left with no choice but to accept the offer .. his hair grows larger than ever and he starts glowing a combination of Red And Purple
.. Goku is very qngry and at the same time disappointed in himself that he underestimated his opponent.. Goku Takes an oath to return to that universe and fight that Bald guy with yellow suit on.
Answer: Yes. After DIO died, Jotaro and the remaining crusaders burned him to ash in the sun at the end.
Explanation:
What is the main idea and two supporting details of this article?
Answer: Main idea: Leonardo Da Vinci had never been on a bicycle, but his ideas for them are helping create better ones for the future.
Supporting detail 1: Companies use his sketches to fix problems with bikes.
Supporting detail 2: A Company made a part for bikes in his honor that helps bike riders.
Explanation:
You may want to add more detail, like the company's name and some evidence from the text if required.
When writing a summary of a text, it is most important to
identify the central ideas of the text.
form an opinion about the text.
list every detail that appears in the text.
compare the text with other texts.
Answer:
1. identify central ideas
Explanation:
When writing a summary, you bear responsibility for the author. Not only you have to extract the significant idea of the text but to paraphrase it correctly. It’s important not to misrepresent any of the author’s conclusions in your summary.
Answer:
A
Explanation:
i got it right
Shedding Light on a Dark Day, by Robin Meriwether
On May 19, 1780, the skies over New England turned dark in the middle of the day. For more than two hundred years, New England's Dark Day had been shrouded in mystery. Some blamed volcanoes. Some suggested supernatural events. Some claimed it was a sign from the heavens. No one knew for certain what happened. Many thought the mystery would never be solved.
Researchers at the University of Missouri were fascinated by the case. They began examining trees in all surrounding areas. Fire damage in a Canadian forest finally revealed the truth. Scientists looked at burned tree rings and discovered that huge wildfires once raged in the mountains near Ontario. The savage flames created blankets of black smoke. The smoke traveled high into the atmosphere, darkening the New England skies hundreds of miles away.
How do paragraph one and paragraph two work together to present the author's ideas?
Paragraph one explains the cause of investigation. Paragraph two shows the results.
Paragraph one offers a solution. Paragraph two explains a problem the solution creates.
Paragraph one presents facts. Paragraph two presents additional facts on the same topic.
Paragraph one and paragraph two do not have a clear connection to each other.
Answer:
It's the first option.
Explanation:
If you go back and read the first paragraph shows that people didn't understand why the dark days were happening. in paragraph to it says that they were fascinated about it so they did studies.
Paragraph one and paragraph two work together to present the author's ideas by presenting a contrast between the mystery surrounding New England's Dark Day and the scientific explanation that was eventually discovered.
What is New England's Dark Day about?The event known as New England's Dark Day occurred on May 19, 1780, when the skies over New England were darkened by a mysterious haze, making the day appear as dark as night.
Paragraph one and paragraph two work together to present the author's ideas by presenting a contrast between the mystery surrounding New England's Dark Day and the scientific explanation that was eventually discovered.
The first paragraph establishes the context of the mystery surrounding the Dark Day, with various theories proposed but no definitive answer. This heightens the sense of mystery and intrigue surrounding the event.
The second paragraph then presents the findings of the research, providing a concrete scientific explanation for what occurred.
Thus, this is a resolution to the mystery is a stark contrast to the uncertainty and speculation of the first paragraph.
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Carrie is asked to give a 5-minute presentation over one of her school's policies. She chooses the dress code. Her school doesn't allow students to wear shorts. Which statement would make a good thesis for Carrie's presentation? A. The way that students dress changes with each generation, but uniforms are trying to curb that individuality. B. We students often have to dress in layers because the school is much cooler or warmer than the weather outside. C. Students should be allowed to wear shorts because there is no shade during the spring when the school is hot. D. The school dress code has many rules, and most students and teachers do not know all of the dress code rules.
Answer:
A. The way that students dress changes with each generation, but uniforms are trying to curb that individuality
Explanation:
The option above will make a good thesis for Carrie because she would be arguing from the point of view of her school placing a ban on students wearing shorts.
This is because, few generations ago, the school rules could have been all students to wear long blouse, as the decades progress, it changes to ankle length blouse, to knee length blouse and finally to trousers. This shows that, the student dresses changes with each generation.
Answer:
C.)
Explanation:
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For someone who naturally thinks in pictures, the best type of organizer to use is ____.
Answer:
pictograph or bargraph
Which lines from the poem suggest an affectionate mood? A. His heart that trembles at the beam/ Of her soul-searching eyes. B. Of beauty—the unhidden heart,/ The playful maziness of art C. Fair River! In your bright, clear flow/ Of crystal, wandering water, D. But when within your wave she looks—/ Which glistens then, and trembles—
Answer:
A). His heart that trembles at the beam/ Of her soul-searching eyes.
Explanation:
Mood is defined as the atmosphere that the author creates in his work using specific words and descriptions in order to evoke a particular emotional state or feeling among the readers. In this question, the first quotation i.e. 'his heart...eyes' displays an affectionate mood as the descriptions like 'his heart trembles' and 'of her soul-searching eyes' signifies that there is a love and devotion towards each other. Thus, option A is the correct answer.
Answer:a
Explanation:
Please write a 2 paragraphs on this sentence that describes 2020
We had everything before us, we had nothing before us,
Answer:
We've had a situation for creation of mass graves, in sorrow and misery.
We had nothing in work, as in lockdown and quarantine
Please write a paragraph, describing how different your life would be if you attended a
segregated school. Keep in mind that white students went to one school, where the students of color went to another
school
Answer:
Explanation:
racist people are more vivid than ever around this time, so going to a segregated school would be obvious. your life would be different because you would influence from white people. there would be almost no difference than that. unless your racist yourself.
Jasmine was carefully arranging bags of fruit - and - nut snack mix when Simon stomped into the cafeteria carrying a large cooler. "Hey what are you doing?" he snapped. "I signed up to sell frozen yogurt today for the chess club!" Jasmine scoffed. "Well I signed up, too. The band needs new uniforms. "
Well I signed up _____, too"
● To sell snacks
● To play in the band
● To join the chess club
● To buy yogurt
Which quotations support the central idea that the conspirators think it will benefit them if they let Antony give the eulogy at Caesar’s funeral? Select two options.
Answer:
"He speaks by leave and by permission"
"It shall advantage more than do us wrong."
Explanation:
William Shakespeare's tragedy play "Julius Caesar" revolves around the murder of Julius Caesar by some conspirators among which is his close friend Brutus. The death was a result of their refusal to accept him as the legal heir and ruler of the Roman empire, for they feel that he was more interested in his personal gain and power and not for the interest of the nation.
Two quotes that support the central idea of what the conspirator believes will be beneficial for them are "He speaks by leave and by permission" and "It shall advantage more than do us wrong." Through these two quotes, Brutus implies that if Antony is given the chance to talk to the people, it will benefit their cause and even help them. Instead of angering the masses and Antony, it might be in their best interest if they let a close friend Antony give his speech, so that in doing so, they (the conspirators) may be understood and not be blamed for the death of Caesar.
Thus, the correct answers are the second and fourth options.
Answer:
A, D.
Explanation:
Just took the test. :)
Read the excerpt from "The Seven Voyages of Sindbad the Sailor.”
"Oh!" replied Sindbad, "do not imagine that I am so unjust as to blame you. On the contrary, I understand your situation and can pity you. Only you appear to be mistaken about me, and I wish to set you right. You doubtless imagine that I have acquired all the wealth and luxury that you see me enjoy without difficulty or danger, but this is far indeed from being the case. I have only reached this happy state after having for years suffered every possible kind of toil and danger.
Which details from the text best support the central idea? Select two options.
Answer:
Explanation:
You doubtless imagine that I have acquired all the wealth and luxury that you see me enjoy without difficulty or danger, but this is far indeed from being the case.
This first sentence answers what Sinbad thinks the person he's talking to thinks. Sinbad knows he is wrong if that's what he thinks. This sentence warns the listener not to draw false conclusions.
I have only reached this happy state after having for years suffered every possible kind of toil and danger.
And here is the central idea. Wealth and luxury are gained only be enduring toil and trouble.
Music
What differences or similarities were there in tempo, or speed, of the music?
Answer:
In simple terms, tempo is how fast or slow a piece of music is performed, while rhythm is the placement of sounds in time, in a regular and repeated pattern. Tempo generally is measured as the number of beats per minute, where the beat is the basic measure of time in music. Rhythm can be thought of as the pattern of music in time.
Which of these is a reliable type of Internet source?
wiki sites
personal blogs
commercial sites
government sites
Answer: D, Government Sites
Explanation:
Government sites will always have correct information as they are run by the government. Wiki sites like Wikipedia allow users to change information on the page, personal blogs have no obligation to be correct, and may be biased, finally commercial sites may be biased or try to give the user incorrect information to interest them in their product.
A good essay will: Be at least 200 words in length and contain at least five paragraphs Contain a good thesis statement with a "so what" Contain three supporting ideas Finish with a strong conclusion Contain evidence from the primary source (the novel) Have few grammar and spelling mistakes
Answer:
thanks
Explanation:
Describe esperanzas first morning with Pepe and lupe
Answer:
Esperanza's first morning with Pepe and Lupe is not good. She makes the babies sick from feeding them raw plums. Then she burns the beans on the stove.
Answer: Not good
Explanation:
Makes his heart thump and race
1. Simile
2. Hyperbole
3. Metaphor
4. Personification
5. Onomatopoeia
6. Idiom
Answer:
Explanation:
It is number 5
What does winning the race symbolize to Kamau?
In the absolutely true diary of a part time Indian, who has the biggest imapct on Juniors life?
Answer:
rowdy
Explanation:
The words "sorrow,"radiant,"lost," "rare" and "nameless,"and "evermore" all add to a tone of...
Answer:
saddness?
Explanation:
Answer:
a mournful mood
Explanation:
Please answer correctly
Answer:
The first multiple choice answer is the answer
Explanation:
Answer:
Its extra information
Explanation:
the 10 of hearts would be
a. light bulb
b. witch hunt
c. hide seek
d. tag
Answer:
Hide N Seek??????
Explanation:
What even is this question?????
what is meaning of word father
Anwser : a male parent. (2) : a man who has begotten a child also : a male animal who has sired an offspring. b capitalized.on:
If you've done 6.3.1 SA PS 2,3,&5 Reading Literature: Understanding Moby
please help a homie out
Answer:
6
Explanation: