Based on sentence fluency, transitions, and writing conventions, which conclusion most needs revision?


Finally, scientists continue to argue their cases for and against a manned mission to Mars. However, an eventual mission seems likely.

In the end, there are logical pros and cons for a manned mission to Mars. It seems its more a matter of when it will happen than if it happens.

In conclusion, there are good arguments for and against a manned mission to Mars. But based on the evidence, it seems as though a manned mission is likely.

Overall, scientists continue to debate the pros and cons of a manned mission to Mars. Yet despite their indecision, it seems almost certain that a mission will happen.

Answer:

The first one

Explanation:

It is not fluid or easily understandable.

Answer:

it is first one

Explanation:

How might the different connotations of words affect a play and its audience?
PLEASE EXPLAIN.

What is the difference between an enticing detail and a revealing detail?

An enticing detail leaves the reader wanting to know more, while a revealing detail explains a crucial part of the plot.
An enticing detail explains a crucial part of the plot, while a revealing detail leaves the reader wanting to know more.
An enticing detail describes a major part of the story, while a revealing detail explains the main character’s background.
An enticing detail explains the main character’s background, while a revealing detail describes a major part of the story.

Which of the following make up an act in a play?
A.
paragraphs
B.
scenes
C.
props
D.
lines

What might happen to a ship in a catastrophic disaster at sea? (Just checking my answer)

Which word completes this analogy? Ambition is to determine as destiny is to _____.
A. past
B. Hope
C. Fate
D. choice

Write a summary of today's passage

The Moment
John Malone

I heard there were whales lunging out of the water
At Henley South.
“Sleek and smooth as peach slices,”
One eyewitness said.
Whales!
I finished what I was doing and went down
For a look,
But the sea was flat and empty.
There were only a pair of cyclists on the other side
Doing up their clips
And a pelican among the gulls gazing wistfully at a spot
Where something might have been.
No sun was out. The sky was whale-gray.
I had missed the moment

read this and make an appropriate inference. How did the inflection of the narrator's voice support this inference?

The Story of Native American Corn
Edward Eggleston

1 When the Pilgrims came to Cape Cod, they sent out Miles Standish and some other men to look through the country and find a good place for them to settle. Standish tried to find some of the Native Americans in order to make friends with them, but the Native Americans ran away whenever they saw him coming. One day he found a heap of sand. He knew it had been lately piled up, because he could see the marks of hands on the sand where the Native Americans had patted it down. Standish and his men dug up this heap. They soon came to a little old basket full of Native American corn. When they had dug further, they found a very large new basket full of fine corn, which had been lately gathered.

2 The Europeans, who had never seen it before, thought Native American corn was very beautiful. Some of the ears were yellow, some were red. On other ears blue and yellow grains were mixed. Standish and his men said it was a "very goodly sight."

3 They wanted the corn for seed. They made up their mind to pay the Native Americans whenever they could find them. The next summer they found out who were the owners of this buried corn, and paid them for all the corn they had taken. If they had not found this corn, they would not have had any to plant the next spring, and so they would have starved to death.

4 The people that were with Miles Standish settled at Plymouth. They were the first that came to live in New England. A Native American named Squanto came to live with the white people at Plymouth. Squanto was born at this very place. He had been carried away to England by a sea captain. Then he had been brought back by another captain to his own country. When he got back to Plymouth, he found that all the people of his village had died from a great sickness. As he could speak some English, and as all his own tribe were dead, he now came to live with the white people

Choose the sentence that BEST summarizes the story.
A) The Indians and Miles Standish were friends.
B) Corn was a very important crop to the Pilgrims and Indians.
C) The Pilgrims had never seen corn before coming to Cape Cod.
D) Miles Standish was the first European to settle at Plymouth.

Read the paragraph below.
Soon after the moving truck departed, I made way next door to greet the new neighbors. A boy was playing in the yard, and I greeted him and introduced myself. In response, the boy ducked his head and mumbled an inaudible reply. Though he smiled, he quickly retreated toward his mother on the porch. When I said, "Welcome to the neighborhood,” his cheeks turned pink, and he disappeared through the open front door.
What inference can be drawn about the boy?

He is upset by the narrator’s intrusion.
He creates imaginative games with others.
He prefers his friends from his old neighborhood.
He is shy and uncomfortable in new situations.

“‘This is miser’s pay for such hard work,’ he said.”

In the context of this passage, what does David mean by the phrase miser’s pay?

fair pay


better than usual pay

someone else’s pay

not enough pay

Yo can someone help me out

Which is a true statement about conflict?


Conflict is the turning point that occurs in every story.

Conflict can occur as the result of the interaction of two characters.

Conflict occurs in some stories but not others.

Conflict is used in the resolution portion of a story.

“I’m gonna make a change, for once in my life. It's gonna feel real good. Gonna make a difference.
Gonna make it right.”
- Michael Jackson: The Man in the Mirror
THINK about the following question:
Does one-single person have the power to make themselves or the world a better place?
WRITE about a moment in a character's life when they decided to make a life-change. The change can
be positive, but it could also be negative.
Be sure to -
• include a well-developed, interesting main character or group of characters
• clearly describe the setting
• convey a deeper meaning, insight, or theme
• use an effective, narrative point of view to develop a plot that centers on a conflict and includes
a clear sequence of events
• use literary devices and craft, including dialogue
• use correct spelling, capitalization, punctuation, grammar, and sentences

PLEASE HELP!!

"If the sista read any faster, I'd be looking for her superhero cape"

Write the Inference about the character
(His or her speech reveals…)

The comparisons in The Call of the Wild among the inexperienced mushers from the South, Francois and Perrault, and John Thornton all reflect on the theme of "blank".

is this a simple or compound sentence?? Jamie leapt from the sinking boat, but she left her hat aboard.

Read the text "How Ice Cream Is Made":

Ice cream is a frozen blend of sweetened cream and air with added flavoring. This is how it is made commercially.

Necessary Ingredients:

Dairy products, including milk, cream, and butter fat

Sugar

Eggs

Flavoring

Approved additives to prevent ice crystals during production process

Production Steps:

Step 1: To start, the ingredients are carefully measured and then combined together. The dairy ingredients, solids, and additives are blended well to ensure the liquid and dry components are completely mixed.

Step 2: Next, the mix is pasteurized. This means it is heated to high temperatures to remove any bacteria which could be found in the raw ingredients. Pasteurization can occur at 155°F for 30 minutes or 175°F for 25 seconds. The temperatures used to pasteurize ice cream need to be higher than those used for milk because the mixture includes high-fat dairy sources, sweeteners, and egg yolks.

Step 3: Following pasteurization, the ice cream mix is homogenized. This occurs when the fat globules in the cream are broken down into smaller parts through vigorous mixing. Once homogenized, the ice cream should be very smooth and uniform, meaning free of bubbles. Now the ice cream will be easier to whip and will not melt as fast.

Step 4: The next step is to let the ice cream mixture stand for at least four hours. During this time, the fat cools and forms crystals.

Step 5: A special barrel freezer is then used to gradually freeze the ice cream. The machine also pumps clean air into the mix. This keeps the ice cream soft and allows it to absorb the different flavorings. Without the air, the mixture would become as hard as an ice cube.

Step 6: During freezing, flavoring can be added. Ice cream flavors have moved on from plain vanilla and chocolate to include hundreds of combinations using fruit, nuts, candy, cookies, and other baked goods.

Step 7: Finally, the ice cream is packaged and put into a blast freezer where the temperature is between -22 to -40 Fahrenheit.

Select the evidence from the text that supports the inference that pasteurizing is an essential step to making ice cream.

A. Following pasteurization, the ice cream mix is homogenized.
B. Pasteurization can occur at 155°F for 30 minutes or 175°F for 25 seconds.
C. The dairy ingredients, solids, and additives are blended well to ensure the liquid and dry components are completely mixed.
D. The mix is heated to high temperatures to remove any bacteria, which could be found in the raw ingredients.

In "Solitude," what can be inferred about the author's relationship with the natural world?

He prefers the natural world to the company of other people.
He feels that human society has become too cold and impersonal.
He is happiest in nature when it is at its most unpleasant.
He feels lonely only when there are no animals around.

Question 2

Part B

Which sentence best supports the answer in Part A?

“I have found that no exertion of the legs can bring two minds much nearer to one another.”
“I go and come with a strange liberty in Nature, a part of herself.”
“Some of my pleasantest hours were during the long rain storms in the spring or fall.”
“They are Nature’s watchmen,—links which connect the days of animated life.”

First Time Voter

Rebecca would like to add a direct quotation about voting to her narrative. Which is the BEST choice to include?

A) “The short memories of the American voters is what keeps our politicians in office.” - Will Rogers

B) “Politics, it seems to me, for years, or all too long, has been concerned with right or left instead of right or wrong.” - Richard Armour

C) “Democracy is a form of government that substitutes election by the incompetent many for appointment by the corrupt few. “ – George Bernard Shaw

D) “The act of voting is one opportunity for us to remember that our whole way of life is predicated on the capacity of ordinary people to judge carefully and well.” -Alan Keyes

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everal times in the story the narrator mentions the cost of items such as: ten-cent cake and $10 blue suede shoes. What can you infer about when this story takes place? Do you think it takes place in the year 2020? If not, what year do you think it takes place?

Read the excerpt from “Raymond's Run.”

But now, if anybody has anything to say to Raymond, anything to say about his big head, they have to come by me. And I don’t play the dozens or believe in standing around with somebody in my face doing a lot of talking. I much rather just knock you down and take my chances even if I am a little girl with skinny arms and a squeaky voice...

How can readers tell that the author is using indirect characterization in this excerpt?

She describes Raymond’s physical traits to tell readers about his character.
She describes Squeaky’s physical traits to tell readers about her character.
She uses Raymond’s thoughts and words to tell readers about his character.
She uses Squeaky’s thoughts and words to tell readers about her character.

Read “The Bundle of Sticks” by Aesop. Explain how the father is an inspirational character. Use details from the text to support your answer.

The Bundle of Sticks by Aesop A certain man had several Sons who were always quarrelling with one another, and, try as he might, he could not get them to live together in harmony. So he determined to convince them of their folly by the following means. Bidding them fetch a bundle of sticks, he invited each in turn to break it across his knee. All tried and all failed: and then he undid the bundle, and handed them the sticks one by one, when they had no difficulty at all in breaking them. "There, my boys," said he, "united you will be more than a match for your enemies: but if you quarrel and separate, your weakness will put you at the mercy of those who attack you."

Union is strength.

Which word best completes the sentence? Select the word from the drop-down menu. After we forced her to answer us, (choose word from below) she stressed that she was innocent of dropping the plates.
empathetically
hesitantly
questionably
voluntarily

Fight or Flight: The Evolution of Stress

How does the central idea in the first half of the passage differ from the one in the second half?

A) Both sections deal with the amazing, but often negative effects of stress on the human body.

B) The first half addresses human responses to danger, and the second section focuses on the positive impact of stress the human body.

C) The first half deals with the effects of stress on contemporary man, while the second half compares this with the effects of stress on early humans.

D) The first half deals with the effects of stress on early humans, while the second half compares this with the effects of stress on contemporary humans.

BRAINLIEST

PLZ HELP QUICK
Sixty seconds!" Not sixty-one. No wiggle room. No "just a couple more seconds - we're almost there." And no second chances. They had just sixty seconds to land on the moon.

Absolutely no one expected it to happen. They painstakingly planned so it absolutely wouldn't-couldn't happen. But here they were, less than five hundred feet from the moon, and just about plumb out of fuel.

—Team Moon: How 400,000 People
Landed Apollo 11 on the Moon,
Catherine Thimmesh

Compare and contrast the author’s purpose for each article.

A. The NASA article is meant to entertain, while Team Moon is meant to inform.
B. The NASA article is meant to inform, while Team Moon is meant to entertain and inform.
C. The NASA article is meant to inform and persuade, while Team Moon is meant only to inform.
D. The NASA article is meant to inform and entertain, while Team Moon is meant to inform.

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"If the sista read any faster, I'd be looking for her superhero cape"

What is revealed through the character’s private thoughts and feelings?

Which type of context clue was used to determine the word "consumed" in the passage?

For months, the game of chess consumed Rita. She used all of her free time to read about strategies, learn new maneuvers, solve chess problems, and play games online against stronger opponents.

a. definition
b. synonym
c. examples
d. antonym

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Directions: Reading the following paragraph and use the sentence start to create an inference and support with evidence.


Kyle ran into his house, slamming the door behind him. He threw his book bag on the floor and plopped onto the couch. After six hours of playing Grand Larceny VII, he ate some pizza and fell asleep with a slice on his stomach and his feet on his book bag. When Kyle came home from school the next day, he was noticeably distraught. He balled up his report card and placed it inside a soup can in the garbage. He then flipped the soup can upside down in the garbage can and arranged loose pieces of trash over it. As he plopped down on the couch, he let out a sigh and picked up his controller.


I can infer________________.

The evidence that supports my inference is _________________.

Arachne and the Goddess, Athena, compete in a weaving competition to see who has the most beautiful tapestries. When suddenly, enraged, the goddess turns Arachne into a spider as punishment for her cruel and foolish depictions of the gods.

A. Character vs. God/Deity
B. Character vs. Self
C. Character vs. Technology
D. Character vs. Society

33)
The root of auditorium is audire, meaning "to hear." Which word means "cannot be heard"?
A) inaudiate
B) inaudible
C) inaudition